Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. • comics • books • radio • television • film • theatre

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As we all know that media is under siege these days , speaking the truth has become more important.

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many media sources are out there, I believe television, radio and films reach the public faster and more effectively.

World

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has become more of a visual place than reading .visuals are processed so quickly, they cause

a faster and stronger reactions

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than words. Televisions are one of the vital sources which bring the

news

to our homes.

News

from every nook and corner of the

world

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International

news

, sports ,entertainment, advertisements and etc

thus

by the invention of satellites

world

has become a global village.

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over watching

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can cause health issues, time management problems and spreading of false

news

are some of the disadvantages to name . As we are getting busier day by day , radios have a remarkable way of helping us by getting to know what's happening around the

world

moreover

songs and programs which help us relive the stress while

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or working.

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the other hand noise pollution,

spreading

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of false

news

are some of the

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downsides

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down sides

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. Films are a

multidollar

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multi dollar

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industry. Hollywood ,Bollywood and films from various parts of the

world

tell stories to reach the community and to the

world

at large. The stories they bring to the big screen has more outreach in the public who embrace the entertaining

world

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society. To conclude I think televisions, home theatres have more impact on

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society. They bring the

news

to our doorsteps , easy accessibility and a media we all prefer .

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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. • comics • books • radio • television • film • theatre

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