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You are going away from home for one week and you need to ask your neighbour to look after your house. - Why you want to go away - What you want your neighbour to look after - If there are any problem then give instructions

#home #week #neighbour #house #instructions
Dear Mayssa, I am writing
this
 letter for demanding
please
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you please
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 to take care of
few
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a few
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 things at my house, during the holiday. As soon as I will be travel for one week only, and you are the only one that I can handle on. As a matter of fact, I am attending a course in Turkey from April 2 to 6.
This
 course is very important in my major which is GM, about the development
for
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of
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 the
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newborn
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new born
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newborn
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 and the prediction toward any possible delay. My demands are to put food and water for my cat and to drain the plants. The cat needs to be fed on a daily basis,
therefore
 I have divided the food for 6 days, and it needs to drink water on a daily basis. For the
plants
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,plants
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 just a small cup
each
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every
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 2 days will be enough to remain alive. I will be available through WhatsApp all the time, so if you need any clarification or you faced any difficulty, just chat
me
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with me
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 on my number and I will guide you. Your prompt action will be highly appreciated, Best regards, Zein Al Chami
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