In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In the
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the advertisements emphasized Add a comma
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their products’ quality but in Change preposition
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modern days, most companies are advertising their products have something new. I believe Correct determiner usage
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this
development has been compounded by two factors: claiming that there is new
feature Correct article usage
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attention
attentions
from customers and makes their brand unique in the market. In Correct your spelling
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is a negative development because it urges people to buy new things while it is not even a need to do so as well as effects
the environment indirectly.
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affects
first
reason is that businesses can bring more buyers under their brand by declaring that there is new
invention in it because it stands out from the competitors and Add an article
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the crowd would think that is
unique which
can’t be found in other products. Correct word choice
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, psychologically, everyone is more likely to be fascinated and feeling
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feel
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they have never experienced before. The Correct pronoun usage
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second
fact is that introducing new versions regularly can gain the
brand royalty from the existing consumers. They believe the new version would offer better service and quality than the older one and Correct article usage
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hence
, they would keep buying whenever the new versions of the same product is
introduced into the market. Take iPhone, Change the verb form
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I reckon that this
is a negative development as it makes the population to
buy unnecessary new things regularly. And Fix the infinitive
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also
there is much possibility that the older ones would be wasted while they are still in the good condition to be used. According to environmental scientists, our world is now piled up with the
wastes which will not be decomposed even after thousand years. It Correct article usage
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environmental pollution. Add the preposition
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Moreover
, the more demands cause the
more production and as a consequence, it leads to global warming as more carbon is generated from production factories.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
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these days, more and more commercials are highlighting that their commodities are new in some way just to stand out from their rivals as well as to attain more Change preposition
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interests
from the consumers. Fix the agreement mistake
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However
, I feel that it results
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outcome
for our environment.Fix the agreement mistake
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