You live in a room in a college where you share it with another student. You find it very difficult to study and work there because your roommate always has friends visiting. He/she has parties in the room and sometimes borrows your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room and explain your reasons. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir, I am Vijaya, pursuing my masters in the department of microbiology. I live in our college
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with another student. I am writing
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letter to share my inconvenience with you.
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, I will explain the problems I am facing with whom I am sharing my
room
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. As you know our exams are approaching I need to study hard but I am not able to give my efforts. The girl who stays with me always has friends visiting our
room
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and they even have parties here till the morning. I asked her many times to consider my difficulty but there is no change from her side.
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to
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, she is not at all cooperative. Sometimes she takes my things without even asking me. I think
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not good.
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I request you to change my
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for the
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term of my course. I prefer a single
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because I don't want to face these issues once again.
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, I can concentrate on my studies peacefully without any hurdles. Yours sincerely, Vijaya Madamanchi.
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