a friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday Describe some possible disadvantages Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Loveleen, I hope that
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letter finds you well. I am very happy that you are planning to go for a camping holiday and thank you for taking me into confidence for some advice. I am sure that camping will provide an escape from your hectic schedule.
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, it will give you an opportunity to forget all kinds of tensions and enjoy nature. But you need to be careful regarding certain aspects.
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, these places are hard to understand and
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, the tour guide is very essential .
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, don't forget to have a mosquito repellent and power bank as these are necessary for these locations. I wish to join you during the camp. I would recommend you to plan
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camping for summer as the weather will be favourable at that time.
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, I have got some time off in May and we decide to go for those days. I hope to hear from you. Best regards, Aman
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