A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

#friend #house #pet #holiday #contact #instructions #care #household #duties #addresses

Dear Ibrahim, I hope you are doing well, I am writing

this

letter to inform you about some details as you have agreed to take care of my house and pet during my holiday period. I want to tell you that I will leave

Friday at 4 a.m. because my flight will be at 8 a.m. and as you know I have to be at the airport three hours prior to the departure time. and it will take one hour to arrive at the airport. another thing I need to tell you is my dog have to get its shower every three days and if he barks, you can give him a treat once a day . you will find its dry food behind the kitchen machine.

in addition

, you have to take my dog for a walk every day at 9 p.m for at least half an hour.

finally

, I will explain to you the chores of my house. you just need to clean the floor only once daily, put any dirty cup or dish in the dishwasher machine and nurture my plants with water twice a week. Thank you so much for taking care of my home and my pet. see you soon my friend. best wishes, Thraa

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