 Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

Nowadays,

computers

are being viewed as fundamental educational tools which have made a

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revolution

in the education industry. Some people argue that the positive consequences of using

computers

are

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credits to them while others argue that the disadvantages negate all the benefits. It is noteworthy to bear in mind that

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has its own two sides and I believe that

computers

are

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definitely

beneficial for

students

. The following essay will overlook the advantages and disadvantages of

this

technology which are proceeding by my idea. On one hand, a great

number

of drawbacks are being argued by experts to undermine

computers

' effects.

Firstly

, it has provided a platform for

students

to cheat and increased the

number

of

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.

For example

, a great

number

of

students

have been graduated from universities after providing

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which

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the copy of

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available ones.

Thus

, the graduates are not qualified as they were in the past.

Moreover

, those

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increased laziness among

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. To illustrate, the

number

of experimental classes have decreased because

students

are being taught by videos and online resources

instead

of going to

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nature and experience.

On the other hand

,

computers

have brought us a lot of benefits. One of the obvious advantages of them is for poor

students

to have the access to

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wide educational sources.

For instance

, the complementary courses had been provided for the

students

who afforded them previously and poor

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were deprived

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them, but

computers

and the available online and offline educational resources now are fairly available for all

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students

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.

Furthermore

,

this

technology has reduced the chance of making

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and the lessons that are being taught are more reliable. A good example is

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mathematics.

Therefore

, as the fair allocation of resources and the importance of teaching correct subjects are

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vital

for a society to improve,

computers

' positive impacts can not be neglected. To sum up,

although

the drawbacks of using these tools are not

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inevitable

, they have brought us many advantages. The prevalence of fraud and laziness are being located against a fair resource distribution and correction of previous mistakes. I believe that

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overweight the

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negative

consequences.