As public safety is of the highest importance. it is often necessary to test new products on animals. It is befter for a few animals to suffer than for human life to be placed at risk by untested products. To what extent do you agree with above?

In modern days, it is vital to conduct trials of new products on

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wild life

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. Because human life is important. It is fair for a small number of

animals

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pain rather than risking

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life with untried merchandise. I completely agree with the statement and

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essay will discuss the reasons.

To begin

with, many individuals are faced with different health ailments which require medicines to be treated.

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to prevent

human

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race from dying and

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good health among community members.

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it is safer to test on other species before giving it to human beings.

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instance

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the polio vaccine was tried on rats before administering it to children.

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animals

are resistant to severe side effects resulting from taking drugs.

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they are unlikely to die from it.

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, with the emerging beauty industry, multiple cosmetics are released onto the market

everyday

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. These products have to be tested on

animals

to check for skin reactions and allergies before human use.

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helps business firms to save money by avoiding costly lawsuits

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therefore

increasing profits.

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, body creams are required to be certified safe before being applied on sensitive skins.

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, it is affordable and quicker to breed

animals

using laboratory

equipments

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for these experiments than human species.

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it is of no harm to lose a few wildlife

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can be easily replaced.

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lab

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rats grow to mature stage within a week. In conclusion,

animals

are easily replaced and cannot press charges. For these reasons, I believe it is okay to sacrifice a few

animals

for the greater good of mankind.