Writing Task1 Letter You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Explain why you want to take time off work Give details of amount of the time you want Suggest how you work could be covered while you are away.

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Dear Mr.Uinsli I hope

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letter will find you well

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and in good spirit. I

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expect that everything is going smoothly on your side. I am writing

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letter in order to express my willingness to take some time off work. The reason, why I want

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is related to my

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. Regardless of my mother's birthday, we are going to visit Paris by tourism. To tell the truth, we are planning to go there next week especially, on 20 of April.

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, our holiday will continue

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week. So, we will come back on 27 of April. You do not have to worry about my projects. As a

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of fact, my colleague Sara promised me to work in

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position of mine, and complete my tasks. Because, when she took 3 days off work, I worked extra hours for her. I would be grateful

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if you permit.

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, my mother would be very upset. I hope you will take into consideration, and accept my plead as if it is highly necessary for me. I look forward to hearing your response to my letter. Yours sincerely, Umurzoqova Z

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coherence and cohesion

Consider using a clearer structure for your paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea to enhance readability and coherence.

task achievement

While your tone is generally appropriate, be careful with phrasing that may come across as overly casual or unprofessional in a formal letter. Phrases like 'I hope this letter will find you well' can be simplified for clarity.

task achievement

You clearly explain your reason for taking time off, which is important for task achievement.

task achievement

Your letter has a warm and polite tone, which is suitable for a request to a manager.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

192 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Respectful greeting (e.g., 'Dear [Manager's name],')
Time off, absence, leave of absence
Personal circumstances, compelling reason
Duration, number of days/weeks
Cover duties, delegate tasks, work handover
Alternative arrangements, contingency plans
Preparation, advance work, assistance
Gratitude, appreciate, understanding
Inconvenience, minimal disruption
Request approval, formally request

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