some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Main

cities

of a country have always been

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of its young generation and for years immigrating to those

cities

had been viewed as a great chance to improve, but recently people are taking a fresh look at it. It is noteworthy to bear in mind that

this

phenomenon has its own two sides.

However

, I believe the negative consequences overweight its benefits. The following essay will overlook two rationales that support my idea.

Firstly

, those capitals are not able to provide desirable facilities for their residents unless they have enough capacity.

For example

,

although

a young adult faced more job opportunities in a big city in past, nowadays the overcrowded

cities

and the strict interview competition have made it impossible for newcomers to find jobs based on their qualifications.

Consequently

, not only do not those immigrants have a better future in big

cities

but

also

their hometowns lose their valuable members.

Moreover

, small towns and especially villages are suffering from ageing. Even though those young adults have a better situation in their destination, they will put their hometowns at the danger of

disapearance

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disappearance

.

For instance

, many rural regions have been depleted from young human resources and by

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of the old generation, their occupations and agriculture have not survived.

This

means the

distruction

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destruction

of the country's

fundamnetal

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fundamental

industry. To sum up, the disadvantages of immigrating to the capitals are much greater than its advantages. I believe that by a

continuous

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increasing population of the large

cities

, they will not be able to provide the required facilities for the immigrants.

In addition

, the country will suffer from

vanishing

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of

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the origin regions and their industries.