some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Main
cities
of a country have always been destination
of its young generation and for years immigrating to those Add an article
the destination
a destination
cities
had been viewed as a great chance to improve, but recently people are taking a fresh look at it. It is noteworthy to bear in mind that this
phenomenon has its own two sides. However
, I believe the negative consequences overweight its benefits. The following essay will overlook two rationales that support my idea.
Firstly
, those capitals are not able to provide desirable facilities for their residents unless they have enough capacity. For example
, although
a young adult faced more job opportunities in a big city in past, nowadays the overcrowded cities
and the strict interview competition have made it impossible for newcomers to find jobs based on their qualifications. Consequently
, not only do not those immigrants have a better future in big cities
but also
their hometowns lose their valuable members.
Moreover
, small towns and especially villages are suffering from ageing. Even though those young adults have a better situation in their destination, they will put their hometowns at the danger of disapearance
. Correct your spelling
disappearance
For instance
, many rural regions have been depleted from young human resources and by death
of the old generation, their occupations and agriculture have not survived. Add an article
the death
This
means the distruction
of the country's Correct your spelling
destruction
fundamnetal
industry.
To sum up, the disadvantages of immigrating to the capitals are much greater than its advantages. I believe that by a Correct your spelling
fundamental
continuous
increasing population of the large Change the adjective
continuously
cities
, they will not be able to provide the required facilities for the immigrants. In addition
, the country will suffer from vanishing
Add an article
the vanishing
of
the origin regions and their industries.Replace the word
off
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