You are moving home. Write a letter to your neighbours to say goodbye to them and to thank them for their help during your stay. In your letter explain how they helped you say what you will miss the most about the area where you lived invite them to visit you at your new home.

Dear Mrs Smita, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I am moving home

this

weekend.

Firstly

, I thank you for your kind and endless support all these years. I am blessed to have you as my neighbours. I have precious memories with your family. You helped me in every situation. It is very hard to say goodbye to you all.

In addition

this

, I will miss

this

place so much. I love the garden and play area where we used to sit and chit-chat by having our favourite black coffee. I will definitely miss your homegrown vegetables.

Moreover

, I miss the calmness and beauty of

this

area. We may be physically distant but you will be very close to my heart.

Finally

, I would love to see you all at my new place. Please do visit me with your family at your convenience. Just give me a call and intimate about your visit. Hope to see you very soon. Yours sincerely, Vijaya Madamanchi.

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7 paragraphs

167 words

9.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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