The length of the working week does not reflect modern lifestyle needs, it should be substantially reduced to give people more leisure time with their families, how far do you agree with this statement,

The workdays'

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length

has always been an issue for employees and employers. While the employees have always wanted it to get reduced, the employers have preferred the traditional six

days

. It is argued that decreasing the working

days

not only does not weaken the industry but

also

the

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opportunity

of spending time with families helps the employees to work better;

however

, I believe

although

the new lifestyle has made

this

change feasible, reducing workdays is not beneficial for a country. The following essay will overlook two rationales that support my idea.

Firstly

, the world is a global village that consists of different integrated countries with various

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national

rules.

For example

, the weekends are different in each country and prolonging these

days

will exacerbate the difficulties that international companies are facing to organize their international market.

Thus

, it will end up in many companies'

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bankruptcy

and a significant increase of

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rate.

Moreover

, the chance of making mistakes rises

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putting pressure on workers. The

less

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work hours means

the

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more tasks to be done in a day.

For instance

, the projects that an architect should finish over 6

days

are

definitly

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definitely

better than the ones that are designed in 4

days

.

Consequently

, the quality of work will decrease and customers can get suffered.

Furthermore

,

although

the new lifestyle has brought us the

privillage

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privilege

of working from

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, mankind can be distracted easily when they are at

homes

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and might make more mistakes without appropriate supervision. To sum up, prolonging the weekend might not be implausible due to the

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lifestyle, but it suffers from drawbacks that negate its benefits. I believe that the distinct countries' rules and the subsequent

choas

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chaos

it will cause

in addition

to the decrease of works' quality are not worth it.