In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, lots of children face

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problem of extra weight. There is an opinion that the government has to provide

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solution to

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issue. I completely agree with

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statement. In

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essay, I will give the reasons for my point of view.

Firstly

, the government has a big impact on the

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of citizens. Considering the problem of kids being overweight, the government has to introduce some solutions to it.

For example

, providing a country with healthy cafes and closing some with fast

food

would

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decrease the number of people with extra weight. It is clear that introducing delicious and healthy

food

in cafes would encourage parents to come there with their kids.

Secondly

, the ruling of the country has the right to allow only healthy

food

at schools. They could even introduce the menus, which is made by specialists.

For instance

, in the

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there would be tasty smoothies and even fruit

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. Cooking soups with lots of vegetables

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would be healthy and tasty at the same time.

Therefore

, If

this

type of

food

would be served at educational buildings, children were healthier. To conclude, the authority has the power to change the children's diets.

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new places of eating and creating a list of

food

for schools would make a great difference in

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of many kids