More and more students choose to go to another country for their higher education.Do you think the benefits outweigh the problems associated with it?

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fact that
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many pupils are going
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abroad for their
further
studies.
Although
students will often struggle with cultural and
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linguistic
challenges while abroad , they will
also
gain
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significant
life experiences that will reward them later in their careers. Though there are some drawbacks,
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the corns are far outweighed by the prons.
Firstly
it cannot be ignored that, a student phase the cultural and
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challenges. Generally,when students go
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the
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overseas for
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higher studies they encounter
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different people having different backgrounds. All these can be a cause of
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and loneliness. Apart from
this
, if the pupil got placed to that country where he or she
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for study
then
it can become a reason of brain-drain If we are looking at the other side of the coin,
however
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experience from the international universities , which will help them in taking best placements addition to
this
, the standard of their living will
also
improve.
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main advantage of studying in abroad is it
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the feeling of brotherhood. While studying
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overseas, one will meet with other personalities from different parts of the
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and it is possible to make friends from all over the world.
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to
this
it
also
provides a cultural immersion opportunity. In the end , the trend for
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studying
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abroad is increasing and it
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some drawbacks and advantages.
Instead
of
this
prose outweigh the cons. These can be ignored too, for a better future.
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