The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

this

modern era,an increasing number of obese people is

one

of the main concerns of society which indirectly links to many health issues that are complicated to treat. To effectively reduce

this

problem, some authorities think that implementing more physical

education

in the school curriculum is

one

of the best ways.

However

, in my perspective, I do not fully agree with

this

statement. Physical

education

means sport,

activities

with more interactive

activities

with each other. Prior to introducing more sports classes, the ministry of

education

needs to properly weigh study and curriculum equally. In conjunction, there's no doubt by increasing physical

activities

can increase the metabolism of a person which can reduce the fat level in the body and train a person to be more active mentally and physically. The advantages of these

activities

are significant marvellous. Despite the positive outcome, I personally disagree that increasing more physical

education

can solve the obesity issue in

one

country.

Firstly

, by implementing solutions that will not resolve the root cause fully, we need to know what is the cause of obesity and take action from there. I believed

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diet like fast food plays a huge role in increasing the number of overweight people. Promoting a healthy diet should be

one

of the actions to be taken.

Furthermore

, more physical

activities

mean less curriculum.

This

will affect the study and learning time of an individual which will bring some negative impact to the country.

Therefore

, sports subjects and curricula should arrange in a way that will bring

a positive outcomes

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for everyone. In conclusion, the research and data from WHO concluded ASEAN has the highest rate of obese individuals. I strongly disagree that solely physical

activities

can solve

this

worldwide issue.