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living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems as well as practical problems to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#country #language
These days, more and more or immigrating to new countries to get a better life.it has been suggested that the
language
 barrier can
cause
 significant
problems
 in social interaction as well as issues in everyday life.
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 partially agree with
this
 idea and in
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 will give some arguments to support my opinion. Generally speaking,there is a wide range of reasons why
people
 believe that inability to speak a foreign
language
 can
cause
 serious
problems
.From a social point of view,the primary argument supporting
this
 idea is that it will be difficult to make friends.
As a result
,
people
 will feel lonely,isolated,and frustrated,which in turn leads to depression and alcoholism.From a practical point of view,another key argument in support of
this
 is that it will be difficult to get a job.If an immigrant cannot speak the local
language
, it is highly unlikely that he will get hired. ,
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 it must be said that there are several arguments against their idea that poor
language
 ability can
cause
 serious
problems
.perhaps the strongest of these is that English is a universal
language
.If
people
 can speak in English,they might be able to commu9nicate effectively,
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 they can use an interpreter.
Last
 but not least,with the help from local
people
 anyone can learn the local
language
. In conclusion, learning a new
language
 is a which is very relevant to modern society. I partially believe that communication barriers can
cause
 serious
problems
.If a person moves to another country and he cannot speak the
language
 at all life will be quite difficult.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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