These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In the current world, the vast majority of adolescents

immegrate

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immigrate

from their hometown to other cites for the various intensives from the higher education to high-paid job positions. These

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integrated

immigrated

demographics mostly tend to

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return

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their hometown at aged years. I will substantiate how the manifest drawbacks of

this

trend outweigh its boons . On the

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hand, as the facilities and welfare are not

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distributed

equally

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between

all of the towns,

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, and rural areas, the significant number of people in

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small

cities encounter the more obstacles for

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enhancing

their quality of life. They have no proper recreations, the well-being educations as well as the jobs' opportunities;

thus

many of youngsters are imposed to leave their hometown, pursuing their educations, or finding well-paid careers. Most of these leavers married and raise their

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members at that destination, and postpone the

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coming

back to home to years after their retirements or the

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marriage

of their children. The primary benefit which

this

tendency has brought is the culture exchanging

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carrying

caring

along those who

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immigrate

.

For example

, when I went to

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Tabriz city for my

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tertiary

treaty

, each time my parents came to see me, they

also

visit the sightseeings

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there.

Moreover

, it is likely that

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universities and organizations take advantage more

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the

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newcomer

, the students or the

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, and find them

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and hard-working more than locals.

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However

, it is noteworthy that there are

also

several drawbacks, the

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exploitation of these employees who are straightforwardly satisfied with the low incomes, and

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population of just special

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metropolises

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. To

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conclusion

, the absorbing the destination cultures being brought along with leavers to their home and the companies' wide choice to recruit, as benefits are outweighed by several significant outcomes like

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transferring

a number of the

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destination

areas to over-populated cites, as mentioned above.