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A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter in connection with the contributions to the article named The
book
 that influenced me most. Let me start by giving a general overview of the
book
, which is on important
women
 in
history
. It displays the life of three black
women
 who gave notorious contributions to science, biology and technology in human
history
. As to why the
book
 had an impact on my life is basically due to the lack of
women
 achievements taught in
history
 classes,
although
 throughout
this
book
 I could see that they exist and played an important whole in our world.
Thus
, I felt motivated, as a young adult, to have big dreams about my personal achievements and profession. Considering the reasons mentioned above, I truly believe that might have people that still need to know about successful
women
 in our
history
 in order to get more motivated to look for better opportunities.
Therefore
, I strongly believe that
such
 a
book
 will have a good influence on other people. I am looking forward to seeing the list of books chosen for
this
 article. Yours faithfully, Christina Smith
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