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Some people think that children should learn to read from traditional paper books, while others feel that it is fine to start the reading process on an e-reader (like a Kindle or iPad). Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Some people hold the view that it is best to convince
children
 to study reading by providing paper
books
 . While others argue that we should not necessarily choose
books
 when we can choose another alternative i.e. e-readers like Kindle or iPad. I am in favour of a
second
 opinion and in
this
 essay,I will compare two sides of the arguments and draw some conclusions. On the one hand , a number of parents consider
books
 as an important role in developing the ability to read .
That is
 to say , the nature of a book consists of the papers which smell good and the sound of the sheets and etc are the factors that provoke a sense of satisfaction and passion for youngsters and leads to better understanding the content and increase their memory to understand reading contents better.
On the other hand
 , others believe that it is completely acceptable to allow
children
 to use e-readers and it does not make any trouble in their process of learning .
However
 ,
children
 may refrain from paper
books
 in their later life .
nonetheless
, they can have all the libraries on their tablets and still can have the encouragement to read stories . In my opinion ,
Although
,it cannot deny the fact that paper
books
 can give parents a sense of nostalgia , it is justifiable that online
books
 facilitated the way of reading and a majority of
children
 can benefit from it even those who live in urban areas which are deprived of book shops . In conclusion, weighing two sides of the arguments , I am in favour of the opinion that online reading not only is fine , but it
also
 gives
children
 a vast number of choices and they easily can choose a favourite topic to read it so we should not underestimate these devices .
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