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In some areas of theUS,a "curfew" is imposed,in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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Not staying outdoors after a special time at night without being accompanied by an adult is
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 issue which some families are strict about in some regions of America. Lack of security in
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society can be the origin of
this
 concern.
However
,putting pressure on young adults can have
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 effect.As a matter of fact, societies ought to be made more secure to make
parents
 more certain about their children's being out late at night.They require to get independent
as a result
 being accompanied by an adult is considered offensive for them.
Instead
 of that,the number of police officers should increase to provide more safety in public places.
Furthermore
,making teens be at home on time is the cause of dispute
amongest
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amongst
parents
 and children which leads to not caring
aboutand
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about and
 respecting other rules in the family,it makes them bully
also
 disobedient. To sum up ,
restriction
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 is not the way to assist
parents
 to control young adults.
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Government
Goverment
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 should make safer communities
to
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make
parents
 sure about their children's being out at night.
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