Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that
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service
should be a part of high school education. Use synonyms
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students
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discuss why pupils should focus more on their studies Linking Words
instead
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As the disciples graduate to high school, the pressure of their studies increases rapidly. They hardly get the time to focus on other activities. Use synonyms
For example
, an institution in the United States published the average grades of its Linking Words
students
after introducing communal work. It was observed that the grades have dropped by 20% from the previous year. Use synonyms
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days to prepare before their exams due to compulsory charity work. Change the quantifier
fewer
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whose families are not able to support them properly. They have to do various jobs in order to continue their education. Use synonyms
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, the data obtained from a low-tier government-funded high school shows that 40% of their Linking Words
students
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As a result
, they would be forced to terminate their employment to allocate time.
In conclusion, though unpaid Linking Words
community
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service
might bring some benefits it will create serious havoc in the disciple's study routine and obstruct them from doing part-time jobs. Use synonyms
Therefore
, I do not support the idea of mandatory social welfare.Linking Words
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