You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter: say what the problem is describe the accommodation you thought you were getting ask the provider to solve the problem

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Dear Manager, I am writing
this
letter to inform you about the dissatisfaction with the rooms which is provided by the management of the
college
. I have enrolled
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one-year course of diploma in the polytechnic program,
college
given a commitment to provide a
room
to stay.
Firstly
, when
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entered the premise, they have allotted a
room
to me which was shared,
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mentioned that
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need a separate
room
to study. I saw the
room
, it was totally untidy and messy. I could not arrange all my belongings in that
room
. Though, I stayed around 10 days. But
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am feeling uncomfortable, even the kitchen is
also
not in good condition. I am facing difficulty having my breakfast and dinner. I had imagined that they will be allotting a spacious
room
and not on sharing basis.
Also
,
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am travelling from
college
to accommodation for almost one and half hours,
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am not getting proper time to concentrate on my studies. I cannot travel
this
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every day. I would like to request you to change my accommodation and provide which is nearby to my
college
. Yours Faithfully, Mohammed Idris.
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