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the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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This
 graph demonstrates the
number
 of visitors who travel to a specific Caribbean
Island
 and compares the
number
 of visitors who decide to stay on cruise
ships
 with another one who decides to stay on an
island
 between 2010 and 2017. In the
year
 2010, there was one-fourth of a
million
 travellers
choosing
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 to stay on
ships
 while three fourth of a
million
 travellers chose to live on the
island
 in that period. When we sum both types of visitors, there were a lot of
populations
 who go to a specific Caribbean
Island
.
Moreover
, in the following
year
, 2011, the group of
populations
 who decided to live on the
island
 increased to 500,000
people
 whereas the group of
populations
 who decided to live on
ships
 was the same
number
 and that was 750,0000
people
 and overall travellers was 1.25
million
 of
foreigners
.
Nevertheless
, the
next
year
, in 2012, the total
number
 of
foreigners
 rose to 1.5
million
 divided into 1.25
million
 for
people
 who decided to live on
ships
 and 0.25
million
 for
people
 who decided to live on the
island
. In the
next
 3 years, including 2013,2014, and 2015, the total
number
 of the group of
foreigners
 went up continuously, 2
million
 in 2013, 2.5
million
 in 2014, and 2.75
million
 in 2015 repeatedly divided into 2 kinds of tourists.
Firstly
,
foreigners
 staying on cruise
ships
 were 1.5
million
 in 3 years.
Secondly
,
foreigners
 staying on the
island
 were half of
million
 in 2013, one
million
 in 2014, and 1.25
million
 in 2015. In 2016, the crowd of
populations
 deciding to stay on
ships
 went up to 1.5
million
 while another type of population went down to 1.25
million
.
Thus
, when we summed both types of
people
, the sum of
people
 was 2.75
million
. The following
year
, in 2017, the sum of all tourists were 3.5
million
 divided into 2
million
 for
people
 who stayed on
ships
 and 1.5
million
 for
people
 who stayed on the
island
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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