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the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

#tourists #caribbean #island
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This
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 graph demonstrates the
number
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 of visitors who travel to a specific Caribbean
Island
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 and compares the
number
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 of visitors who decide to stay on cruise
ships
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 with another one who decides to stay on an
island
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 between 2010 and 2017. In the
year
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 2010, there was one-fourth of a
million
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 travellers
choosing
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 to stay on
ships
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 while three fourth of a
million
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 travellers chose to live on the
island
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 in that period. When we sum both types of visitors, there were a lot of
populations
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 who go to a specific Caribbean
Island
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.
Moreover
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, in the following
year
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, 2011, the group of
populations
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 who decided to live on the
island
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 increased to 500,000
people
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 whereas the group of
populations
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 who decided to live on
ships
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 was the same
number
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 and that was 750,0000
people
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 and overall travellers was 1.25
million
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 of
foreigners
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.
Nevertheless
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, the
next
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year
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, in 2012, the total
number
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 of
foreigners
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 rose to 1.5
million
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 divided into 1.25
million
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 for
people
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 who decided to live on
ships
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 and 0.25
million
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 for
people
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 who decided to live on the
island
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. In the
next
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 3 years, including 2013,2014, and 2015, the total
number
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 of the group of
foreigners
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 went up continuously, 2
million
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 in 2013, 2.5
million
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 in 2014, and 2.75
million
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 in 2015 repeatedly divided into 2 kinds of tourists.
Firstly
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,
foreigners
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 staying on cruise
ships
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 were 1.5
million
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 in 3 years.
Secondly
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,
foreigners
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 staying on the
island
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 were half of
million
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 in 2013, one
million
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 in 2014, and 1.25
million
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 in 2015. In 2016, the crowd of
populations
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 deciding to stay on
ships
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 went up to 1.5
million
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 while another type of population went down to 1.25
million
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.
Thus
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, when we summed both types of
people
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, the sum of
people
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 was 2.75
million
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. The following
year
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, in 2017, the sum of all tourists were 3.5
million
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 divided into 2
million
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 for
people
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 who stayed on
ships
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 and 1.5
million
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 for
people
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 who stayed on the
island
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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