Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

According to the world population reports, children's born rate yearly high and transportation become major ride and business. In my perspective, the state spends money on transportation and needs maintenance for cleaning and other beneficial services. If the ministry spends lots of money on track department maintain
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reputation and status of the country. rail
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are one of the common rides in my country as road navigation because of fare price and enjoyments. The authority spends lots of money on railway lines they will maintain their road traffic and population.
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, people will be moved by train but the authority set some stick rule of
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like Singapore. line department significant focus cleaning, be on time, online booking system and redeem points. In Japan almost all people are travel by train one of the major reasons is a train on time and cleans.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Carbon emissions
  • Mass transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Economic growth
  • Regional development
  • Initial investment
  • Feasibility
  • Flexibility
  • Rural areas
  • Integration
  • Sustainable
  • Efficiency
  • Infrastructure
  • Commuters
  • Public expenditure
  • Autonomous vehicles
  • Long-term investment
  • Accessibility
  • Connectivity
  • Modal shift
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