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Nowadays,more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face.Is this a positive or negative development?

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An increasing number of
people
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 meet and talk to their friends online
instead
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 of in person.In my opinion,developing relationships by using the
internet
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 has both advantages and disadvantages.The following cases and examples below will help support my point of view. On the one hand,there are numerous benefits to meeting
people
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 online.Nowadays,most countries encounter with "CO-VID 19" pandemic which is affected
people
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's lives,so they are unable to go outside to meet their friends
face
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 to
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.
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,online social networking can provide opportunities for citizens to keep in touch with their peers through applications
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 as Facebook,Line and Instagram that are available to have a video call as well as
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 to
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.
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,talking to friends on the
internet
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 can help maintain their relationships.Another case is that students are prohibited to go to school because of pandemic disease and study online every day ,so they become depressed.If they get a chance to communicate with their colleagues,they will not feel alone.
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,using the
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 to socialise may have some negative outcomes.
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,some
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 are addicted ,so they spend the majority of their time staying at home in a private room without meeting other
people
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.
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,these
people
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 become a
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relationship
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relationships
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 with their families.
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,it is obvious that teenagers are deceived easily by
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 users
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 as cheating money and hacking an account because parents have no way of monitoring and protecting their children.
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,some
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 unreveal themselves,so they use fake identities that everyone is unaware of dangers. In conclusion,having an increase of the relationship with peers or others by using the
internet
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 provides advantages in terms of situations that
people
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 cannot meet
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 to
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.
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,they will be hazardous,if
people
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 are unaware.The cases and examples above have supported my point of view to the best.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social media platforms
  • online interactions
  • virtual communication
  • global community
  • interpersonal skills
  • digital divide
  • cyberspace
  • virtual presence
  • social networking
  • mental wellbeing
  • digital literacy
  • safe spaces
  • marginalized groups
  • face-to-face communication
  • socialisation
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