Some people think that private schools have many advantages while others think there have many drawbacks for the community. Discuss both sides and give an opinion

As a number of research, as well as any anecdotal evidence,pieces of ,evidence suggests that there are apparent merits of private
schools
,
on the other hand
, some people think that it brings demerits for the communities.In
next
paragraphs will discuss both sides and I think more or less private
schools
are beneficiary for localities as they provide high standards and competition for government-funded institutions.
Firstly
, let us consider self-financed
schools
,which are managed by motivated trustees or owners for raising standards of
education
in society,providing well-trained and experienced teaching staff with all the necessary equipment required for better training of
students
.
Furthermore
,these
schools
follow the curriculum of well-reputed
schools
from abroad which gives global recognition of local
education
.,
Additionally
these
schools
make their
students
work hard after school by giving them a bunch of extra activities and homework.The drawback for these
schools
is the cost of
education
and not affordable to common individuals.
On the other hand
,Government
schools
follow local standards of
education
so,their learning tools are remaining outdated for a number of occasions,their teaching staff do not have great energy in teaching as they lack motivation and never keep themselves updated.School buildings are out of renovations as well as much crowded with the high number of
students
because the teacher to
students
ratio is high.One good thing is they are open for everyone and affordability is not a question as they are publicly funded. So in the end ,comparing both types of
schools
and considering the pros and cons,I will opt in favour of private
schools
for the sake of prestigious
education
and recognition of the school.
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