A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Jane, Thank you for agreeing to take care of Happy. I have written a few instructions for you so that you don't find anything difficult. I will be staying at Raddison Blue, Miami and my room number is 203. You can call me on my cell phone if there is an emergency. For Happy, I have placed his dog food in the kitchen pantry. Please fill his dish twice, morning and evening.

Also

, make sure he has access to clean water all the time. You have to walk him twice a day preferably before 7 am in the morning and after 6 pm in the evening as the neighbourhood gets crowded. Can you

also

vacuum the couch and the carpet once a day? You can find the vacuum in the washing area. I'm

also

expecting a parcel, could you please collect them and keep them in my office area? If you want anything from the fridge, please feel free to take them. I hope to return by Monday and looking forward to seeing you very soon. Once again thank you for agreeing to do

this

. It means a lot With love

Submitted by Shravya.vijayadurai on Sun Mar 27 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

192 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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