Educaiton should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All levels of educaiton, from primary school to tertiary education, should be free. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

“

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is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world” was a quote from the famous freedom fighter Nelson Mandela. In the end,

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itself can be divided

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two major disciplines. The Western and Eastern

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systems

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. Despite

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their similarities, these two

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have distinct differences that can’t be ignored when people take a closer look at them.

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difference is the way of teaching. While

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Western

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understanding,

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Eastern

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memorizing.

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,

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learn from memorizing facts from their books or solving one exercise after another. In the end, there is still the danger that

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might not understand the knowledge, but just

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from the teachers. In Western countries, the teachers spend a lot of time

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sure that the

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have fully

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their lessons. They spend more time

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class and group

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in order to know how to speak up logically and learn to accept other people’s opinions, which is

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time-consuming. The

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difference is the way how the teacher and the school treat each

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’

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. In Wester,

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are highly recommended to have their own

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and the schools

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offer different activities for them. In contrary to the eastern

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, where learning is the most important thing for the

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and

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not related to learning are not encouraged. Through

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example, people can have a better insight into the

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and understand

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society.

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but not least, Eastern and Western

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systems

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produce variant characters. The East produces individuals who have good academic results but with a lack of

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and

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outside their studies. In the meantime,

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produces

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with diverse

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and many different

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.

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, their academic results are might not as perfect as their different

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.

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, while the West focuses on

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, the East focuses on the whole. To conclude, both

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have their own advantages and disadvantages. As the Western

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focuses on building up

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with a diversity of

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, the East focuses on

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with potential ability. In

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way, each of the

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wants the best for the

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and there is no “best”

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in

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sense.