Modern lifestyles are completely different from the way people lived in the past. Some people think the changes have been postitive, while others believe they have been negative. Discuss both these points of view and give your opinion.

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modern lifestyles have been changed completely since the

last

few decades due to the impact of

technology

advancement

. Some

people

believe that the changes have been very positive owing to two reasons.

First

of all,

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technology

advancement

enables improvements in education and healthcare. For

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, the iPad and various applications

such

as ZOOM are widely used in tutoring and

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sophisticated devices are adopted by the hospital.

Furthermore

, the

technology

greatly facilitates the production in

manufacturing

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industry by making the process automatically rather than manually, and

thus

increases the economic growth of the nations.

On the other hand

, some

people

believe that the

technology

advancement

brings

to

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environmental implications. It is evident that owing to the

technology

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development,

people

are suffering from increased air and water pollution more than in the past. The exhaust fuels emitted from the cars greatly worsen the air quality and the sewage discharged from the manufacturing industry

also

pollutes the water.

In addition

, the social relationships of the

people

are

also

impacted since

people

are having more interest

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social media sedentarily rather than having intimate face-to-face conversations.

Therefore

,

people

may spend less time together and

this

could impact

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quality of life. In conclusion,

although

it is evident that there are some advantages of

technology

advancement

, the disadvantage could not be neglected, especially the

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and

society

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problems. But overall, the changes are mostly beneficial to the community as a whole as long as we implement appropriate environmental or sustainable measures to protect our natures.