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The world of work is changing rapidly and people cannot depend on the same job or the same conditions of work for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work

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Globally, the job market is going through a transition phase, the stipulates of working is changing and individuals cannot be reliant on the same
work
 environment for their entire life.
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Throughout
this
 essay, I will not only discuss the reasons for these changes but will
also
 suggest ways in which an individual can be better prepared for
such
 a .
To begin
 with, in present times, the influence of
technology
 on
work
 is major and
technology
 keeps on going through an
upgradation
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up-gradation
 process. Certain technologies, which were utilised in jobs prior have become
absolete
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obsolete
absolute
 now.
For instance
, in the
90's
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 Microsoft Messenger and Hotmail were the main mode of internet communication at
work
.
However
, in
present
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scenario
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 there are multiple methods by which a person can communicate
and
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his ideas in the professional world
such
 as Zoom,
Whatsappweb
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Whatsapp web
, Microsoft Teams etc. Another cause for change is the concept of requiring
a
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office
 space or commuting to
office
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an office
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 in order to get
work
 done is changing. With the advent of the worldwide web,most jobs can be done from the confines of a home or from any mobile location, as
such
 an arrangement enables employers to save costs on the
office
 space and overheads For an individual to adapt to the changes in the
work
 domain he must ensure that he is proficient enough about the changes in
technology
 affecting his
work
 and if not,
then
 he must upgrade his understanding of the same.
For example
, there are short courses in online platforms
such
 as
coursera
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Coursera
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 and Udemy on where a person can upskill to keep pace with the new technologies at
work
.
Furthermore
, People must be able to complete their assignments from home or anywhere else, without being physically present in
office
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.
Moreover
, to achieve
this
, they must schedule their
work
 in a proper manner and be able to
work
 with limited resources. To conclude,
shift
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 in
technology
 and the willingness of job providers to allow employees to complete their
proffessional
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professional
 commitments from anywhere are the major reasons for the change in
work
 pattern.
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