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Some people believe that modern designs for schools and offices with more open spaces are necessary. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such spaces? Give your opinion.

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Many people are of the opinion that
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 of open areas
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 to be taken under consideration while designing educational institutes and office
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. Throughout
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 concept and provide my view on the same.
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 with, in modern times, due to lack of
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 built with constricted
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, which hinders movement and mobility among the people. Due to lack of movement and sitting for prolonged periods of time, people are prone to develop certain health issues
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, stiff muscles etc.
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, open areas will prevent certain body ailments. Another important aspect to be taken into consideration is ventilation. Many a time, due to closed
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 in offices and schools there is improper cross-ventilation, disrupting the intake of oxygen, which is vital for the functioning of the brain and other organs in the body.
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, as per science, sitting in an environment with a lack of fresh air and in air condition can not only cause health issues but
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 hinder brain productivity, affecting the student's grasping capacity and
employees
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 work productivity. At the same time,there is no doubt that due to inflation the cost of land has increased dramatically and every square meter of
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 is of great value.
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, in order to provide more
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, the budget for the
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school
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shool
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 or office building will shoot up, making
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 a design commercially unviable.
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,office sharing is a concept
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 is gaining a lot of traction in recent times, as it stresses
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capacity utilization, by accomodating
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 number of employees with an area,
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 the cost of infrastructure significantly down. To conclude, there are numerous advantages and disadvantages of having the provision for a free
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 in an architectural design.
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, the benefits of having a certain amount of open
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 are greater than not having any open
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