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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss Both views and give your opinion.

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Most people believe that a good advertisement is the most important and successful for persuading or drawing consumers’ attention to choosing to purchase or use goods and services of their business.
In contrast
, others do not agree with
this
 belief. Other populations think that an advertisement is the only common method for attracting buyers to buy their products. In
this
 essay, we will point out both views of advertising and provide my point of view for
such
 an essay. Most owners of businesses deeply believe that advertising plays a significant role in accessing customer needs and wants because if their firms can create some advertisements which capture customer needs and wants,
this
 method makes their companies or business become successful a lot in the fierce business competition in nowadays.
For example
, an owner of the organization decides to hire a celebrity in order to promote their commodities so that the fan club of the celebrity will buy goods and use services that the celebrity is hired for promoting commodities. If the organization can understand about customer wants, the company can use
such
 a promotional program which they produce to respond and entice new buyers to buy products.
On the contrary
, other populations may think that
this
 advertisement is the only usual that which cannot capture the needs and wants of purchasers. If some advertisements do not have interesting points which can respond to the necessity of buyers, that promotional program will not make any benefits to the firm because the company must spend a lot of operating costs for filming a commercial film for promoting merchandise.
This
 result may cause the firm to have debts.
For instance
, the company produce commodities that are not creative and do not have a new process for promoting their products.
This
 method of advertising may cause purchasers not to buy, ignore or skip
such
 a promotional program resulting in losing customers’ attention. In sum, from my perspective, I truly believe that if which a commercial video can succeed in capturing consumers’ attention, that video may affect the good result of the organization.
However
, if that commercial film cannot respond to consumer wants, that video is useless and may have a negative impact on the corporation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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