Some people believe that childhood is the best stage of happiness . While others believe that a person can enjoy more happiness in other stages of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Number
of people think that Change the article
A number
The number
early
years are Correct article usage
the early
most
enjoyable years in individuals' lives. But others say that Correct article usage
the most
person
has more fun during the other stages of life. Indeed, every stage has its own taste. So this
esaay
will discuss both views before getting Correct your spelling
essay
on
the conclusion.
On one hand, during babyhood Change preposition
to
human
contains Fix the agreement mistake
humans
high
level of potential to attempt different tasks. They are all free to do anything they want. Add an article
a high
Moreover
, they tend to explore the environment more openly. They do not worry about daily hustle. It is likely to be more joyable
for adult people watching kids in their childhood. Correct your spelling
enjoyable
For example
:- Correct your spelling
newborn
new born
babies to 10 years old kids do not really deal with any kind of stress that adolescents do.
There on other hand, as Correct your spelling
newborn
person
transforms from a child to an adult he goes through different bars. Correct article usage
a person
For
instance
some teenagers Add a comma
,instance
likes
to Change the verb form
like
hanging
around with their friends, follow up Change the form of the verb
hang
fashions
, social media and Change preposition
on fashions
enjoying
their fresh love lives. Wrong verb form
enjoy
Although
, I believe that it gets affect
as the Change the form of the verb
affected
person
steps on the aging
ladder. They feel more Change the spelling
ageing
resposible
for themselves and the people around them. They get more Correct your spelling
responsible
career focused
and sometimes they like to go according to the Add a hyphen
career-focused
the
planned things which shows their seriousness for the future.
In conclusion, Remove the redundancy
apply
i
think every Change the capitalization
I
person
has different criteria of enjoyment in their lives. But, i
would Change the capitalization
I
also
like to say that every person
should keep looking positively through every aspect to make life memorable at evey
step.Correct your spelling
every
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