Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Several individuals are of the view that having worldwide sports

games

is beneficial to the state whereas others think

this

is not good. I am of the opinion that hosting sporting

games

is of great benefit to the country. The essay below will discuss both views at length.

First

and foremost, having

games

in a country may attract a

lot

of tourists thereby leading to development because

such

events bring more money.

Therefore

, I support the idea of hosting worldwide

games

.

For example

, in 2007 South Africa hosted the World Cup, which attracted a

lot

of tourists from all over the universe. A study conducted by certain students showed that there was a 15 per cent growth in the tourism sector and more than seven stadiums were developed. If it were not for the world cup

such

development was not going

to happen

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.

On the other hand

, hosting international sports is seen as bad because it brings a

lot

of

crime

to the country of the host.

This

view does not hold water because borders can tighten rules and police can ensure the safety of everyone.

For instance

, when Tunisia hosted the African Cup of Nations in 2000, little

crime

was reported as soldiers and police guarded everywhere and everyone.

Therefore

,

crime

can be controlled during

such

events. In conclusion, I support that international

games

are a great advantage to the state of the host as it brings development and increment

on

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the tourism sector.

However

, some people do not think so as they are of the thought that

such

occasions bring a

lot

of

crime

. These and other views have been discussed in the essay above.