you are a student at a university in the UK. you have recently lost your university id card.write to the local police station, giving details of who you are,what happened and ask to record your details so you can apply for a new id card.

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Dear sir, I am writing

this

letter to bring to your notice

last

Sunday

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was losing my student I'd card .It is very important for me because more than work depends on

this

so please help me and I give you detail about it. My name is XYX and I am a student of The LLC university because I am a

second

-grade student and

last

Sunday I had gone to the cafeteria with my friends because

this

time all my friends were free so we are enjoying

this

day but I lose my university card I remember Me carry my phone my pocket so I think that time lost it. I check my whole but it is not hared so I am writing a complaint about it happen as well as

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take dare pressure about it accident please not my complete and after I for

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card because it is more important to me . I hope you notice my letter and reply to me soon about it and give me any suggestions about it so please call my number 35678. Your, Truly.

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

185 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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you are a student at a university in the UK. you have recently lost your university id card.write to the local police station, giving details of who you are,what happened and ask to record your details so you can apply for a new id card.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

High school students are usually not good at managing money. What are the reasons? What are the solutions?

In some cultures children are encouraged to compete against each other. What are the advantages and diadvantages of this approach?

Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Even though Globalization affects the world’s economics in a very positive way, its negative sides should not be forgotten. Discuss.