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Some people believe that having a conversation on a mobile phone in a public or crowded place should be banned. Others feel that we should be able to talk wherever we like. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #conversation #phone #place
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 common opinion that talking
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though
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telephone
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 in public areas should not be appreciated,
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 there are
also
 people who think they are free to talk. In my opinion, it depends on
situation
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 and everyone can decide on their own what to do. On the one hand, there are places, where individuals cannot do any loud voices.
For example
, public transport is
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 by lots of human beings and most of them are tired there and if everyone talks, there would be really noisy. In Japan, there is unspoken law to not make any noise in buses and trains, even if someone whispers,
other
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ones
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will squint.
Hence
 everyone can peacefully get to their destination without any
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.
On the other hand
, since no one
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 an opportunity to talk,
person
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a person
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 can skip a really important call. There are situations where
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an individual
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individual
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 cannot miss it. It can be a call from
boss
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, where they ask about
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document
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, and if
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a worker
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worker
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do
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 not
response
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,
furthermore
this
 person can be fired. Or human
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, people should just not
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continuously and loudly have a conversation on
phone
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the phone
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, they can quickly
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 and hang up. They should have a choice to answer
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a call or not on their own. If
person
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decide
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that is
 necessary to have that discussion,
then
 he can have it.
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