In some parts of the world, the rate of divorce has increased dramatically over the past few decades. Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.

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In the past divorce was unacceptable.It has been observed by many that nowadays, a ratio of

a divorces

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is growing swiftly compared to the past.There are

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several

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severals

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reasons for

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a situation,

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some primitive steps can be taken to solve

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problem.Both the causes and measures are elaborated

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with, the foremost one is the join family.To explain it, we can see that today's everywhere has a trend to a nuclear family, where couples can stay

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family.in a join family has chances to fight for

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,foods, house

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, kids as well as elders,

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types of causes can

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as a

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separation

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extramarital affairs to explicate it, in

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modern time half of the folks who

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extra affairs

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of a home,

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are not loyal

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a partner.

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,in 2019, it was revealed by America that 80% of

couples

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divorce reasons were

extra marital

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extramarital

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affairs.

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, a growing divorces rate is becoming

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major situation in the world.

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, some steps can be taken to solve

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problem.

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, couples who have

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issue

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regarding family problems

they

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must solve

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.could share everything

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each other and

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family members should encourage them, they should motivate them about their

kids

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future.For

instace

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instance

, 90% of

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parents do not get a

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only for their

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children

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they have a problem with each

others

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, they should spend more time with each other

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,can arrange a trip or small vacation

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the weekends, and

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should feel special to each

others

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Through it may be they do not get attracted

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another

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. In conclusion, the number of divorces is increasing day by day

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various reasons.

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, it can be

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declined

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by some measures like

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understanding spending times

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