In some parts of the world, the rate of divorce has increased dramatically over the past few decades. Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.

In the past divorce was unacceptable.It has been observed by many that nowadays, a ratio of
a divorces
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is growing swiftly compared to the past.There are
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several
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severals
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several
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reasons for
such
a situation,
also
some primitive steps can be taken to solve
this
problem.Both the causes and measures are elaborated
further
.
To begin
with, the foremost one is the join family.To explain it, we can see that today's everywhere has a trend to a nuclear family, where couples can stay
comfertable
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comfortable
instead
of
big
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family.in a join family has chances to fight for
an equalities
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equality
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,foods, house
chors
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, kids as well as elders,
this
types of causes can
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as a
sapretion
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separation
.Another one is
the
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extramarital affairs to explicate it, in
the
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modern time half of the folks who
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extra affairs
out
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outside
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of a home,
they
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are not loyal
with
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a partner.
For example
,in 2019, it was revealed by America that 80% of
couples
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couples'
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divorce reasons were
extra marital
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extramarital
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affairs.
Hence
, a growing divorces rate is becoming
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major situation in the world.
On the other hand
, some steps can be taken to solve
this
problem.
Firstly
, couples who have
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issue
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regarding family problems
they
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must solve
it
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them
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.could share everything
to
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each other and
also
family members should encourage them, they should motivate them about their
kids
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future.For
instace
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instance
, 90% of
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parents do not get a
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only for their
childern
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children
,
although
they have a problem with each
others
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.
Secondly
, they should spend more time with each other
like
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,can arrange a trip or small vacation
in
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the weekends, and
also
should feel special to each
others
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Through it may be they do not get attracted
with
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another
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one another
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. In conclusion, the number of divorces is increasing day by day
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various reasons.
However
, it can be
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declined
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by some measures like
,
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understanding spending times
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