Write a letter to a transport office about a problem with the transportation system in your area. • Describe the situation you are facing • Why do you consider it a problem • What change you would like to recommend.

Dear sir I am writing
this
letter to inform you about the transport system, which is causing a lot of inconvenience to the people. There are various problems people faced due to the inconvenience
by
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the public
bus
service.
As
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bus
does not reach the
bus
stand on time. The buses are in poor condition & misbehaviour of
bus
conductor is a major concern. As buses are always delayed, professionals are not able to reach offices on time.
Secondly
, the buses are in very bad condition to extent that windows are broken & there is no sign of cleanliness.
Moreover
, the
bus
conductor does not behave well as there has been a fight with passengers many times. I suggest if some changes are implemented, it can solve all the problems that people are experiencing.
Firstly
, the
bus
driver should be strictly informed to reach the
bus
station on time.
Secondly
, The issue regarding keeping the
bus
clean can be resolved by appointing the sweepers.
Lastly
, the
bus
conductor should be strictly advised not to indulge in the fight with passengers. I hope you will take some strict action. You’re faithfully Mandeep Singh
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