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Deforestation is a serious matter, as the forest throughout the world are coming to an end. What are the causes, solutions and effect of this problem.

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The world population growth, as well as the human demand for natural resources, have caused a problem of diminishing forests around the
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 on our
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. The causes of
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 are multiple and probably of very different kinds, in my opinion, poverty in rural areas is one of the reasons that drive the necessity to destroy the
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 looking for wood,
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 one may think that the use of land for agriculture and livestock is a reason to take
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 away. Poor controls from government authorities call for
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 protection, enabling offenders to get away with their acts.
Forest
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 acts on our
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 in many positive ways, they are the habitat of many species of animals and plants, they
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 help with the regulation of the temperature of the
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, and in some ways as an absorber for CO2, the gas that causes the greenhouse effect. The solution to avoid
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 should come from all over the world, in my opinion, it is important that the international organizations that are in charge of protecting the environment maintain their efforts to keep people of the world aware of the importance of protecting the environment. It is necessary to create mechanisms to offer alternatives for the farmers to avoid the devastation of the
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. Stop
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 should be a priority for humankind, the benefits of the different kinds of natural habitats for our
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 are undeniable. We, as one more of the species that inhabit
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 Earth, should learn to live together, respect and protect all leaving creatures.
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