What do you think of the phases to produce sugar from sugar cane plant

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The diagram illustrates the phases to produce
sugar
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from
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sugar
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the sugar
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cane
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plant. Overall, the production of
sugar
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involves seven steps that
begins
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with growing the
sugar
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cane
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in
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farms and culminates in drying and cooling the
syrup
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to form
sugar
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. In the
first
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step, the
sugar
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canes are grown
in
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farmland for about a year to 18 months and
then
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the mature
plan
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plant
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is harvested either manually or with the help of agricultural machinery. The manual method involves farmers removing the leaves
first
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and
then
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chopping the canes, while the mechanized method uses
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a machine
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machine
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to cut the canes directly. After that, the
sugar
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cane
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stalks are crushed in a grinder, resulting
into
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formation
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the formation
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of
sugar
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cane
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juice. In the
next
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step, the juice is purified by going through a limestone filter.
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, the juice is heated in an evaporator and by vaporization of
water
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it becomes a
syrup
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. The
syrup
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is
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poured into a centrifuge where it separates
sugar
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crystals from
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syrup
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the syrup
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.
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, the
sugar
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is produced by drying and cooling the crystals.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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