Some countries are struggling with an increase in crime rates. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In

this

day and age,

crime

has become one of the most negative

problems

in many cities. Some people said the only

way

to solve these

problems

is to increase the manpower in

police

facilities.

However

, I partially agree with

this

statement, I believe there

are

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various

way

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to tackle these

problems

. Some people believe that local

police

and some

police

headquarters should increase more men working

in

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stress.

For example

, more

police

patrols will be able to stop some illegal

activities

such

as robbers,

stealer

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in a fast and effective

way

.

Furthermore

, increasing manpower in the

police

also

can help the local citizens feel secure around where they live, and

also

reduce the unemployment rate in the city.

However

, I think

this

only can be a short-term solution, criminals will find a

way

to do illegal

activities

without being seen by the

police

. In my opinion, to reduce the amount of

crime

in the city,

firstly

, the government should strengthen the law;

therefore

, criminals will know that their illegal

activities

can lead to some enormous and negative consequences. Another solution

should

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be taken is at some stress that has

crime

problems

, the government should apply some 24/7 cameras. Even Though

,

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can be expensive, it will let the

police

know if someone is doing some illegal

activities

without

the

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report from the civilian. In conclusion, increasing the manpower in some

police

stations may reduce the

crime

rate.

However

, some effective solutions should be taken to solve these

problems

,

such

as using high-tech facilities or strengthening the law.