Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
With interrelation between the foreigners and the local community.
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people
to migrate to different nations. These immigrants face social challenges and other problems due to language
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such
an environment.
On the one hand, some people
like the experience that comes with learning local
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a local
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, these happy moments strengthen the bond between people
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this
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As a result
, treating the foreigners as part of the general populace.
On the other hand
, language
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the language
a language
barrier
can cause loneliness. A key reason for remaining for interacting with people
is that loneliness is bad for our health. As we can become depressed and anxious, which can in turn
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, in turn,
medical
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a medical
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problems
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their wife or husband. Because being lonely gets a great toll on them. Correct your spelling
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language
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the language
barrier
. Consequently
, leading to poor economic growth for the country.
To sum up, language
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the language
a language
barrier
can negatively impact social interactions and other cause challenges to certain
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a certain
part
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communication
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the communication
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is entirely justified.Submitted by Mikado on
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