In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Always advertisements try to impress with a new
product
that a business has just lounged.
However
, now, it is noticed that
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they promote a
product
focusing on a special thing which might have. In my opinion, they are making an effort to appeal
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, making them curious to try the
product
and personally speaking,
this
is a negative development
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because we keep on buying things that we do not really need.
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this
development and if
that is
a negative or positive
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First
of all, it is clear that businesses advertise their
products
in order to impress the public, but, unfortunately, people
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that way, constantly buy things that are almost the same. Many
products
are used for the same reason, they have the same results, but depending on the focus they gave on their promotions, customers will buy more than two
products
, which do the same thing.
For instance
, there is a huge variety of
products
for acne treatment
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the market, but two new
products
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just lounged. The
first
one
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promotes that except
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acne treatment, it
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the skin as well. The
second
one
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said that contains hyaluronic acid, which makes the skin
smoothier
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smoother
. These two
products
do the same thing, but I, like so many other people, bought both.
On the other hand
, that way the market continues to rise as well as the economy. If we do not buy things, the market will decrease.
This
flow of consumption is necessary for the worldwide economy.
For example
, if the selling rates of a company are not suitable, the business will close and many employees will be without a job. In conclusion, the
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emphasising in their
advertisings
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that their
products
are new in some way
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is to impress people, so they will go on buying them, making them believe that they do not have a
product
like
this
. In my point of view,
that is
a negative situation, provided that we end up buying many similar
products
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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