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Many people believe that music is just a form of entertainment, whilst others believe that music has a much larger impact on society today. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (250 words).

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Music
 is the language every
soul
 understands, without limitations.
Music
 can be of any language
which
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that
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 one might not understand, but the
rhyrthm
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rhythm
speak
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 volume to the
innerman
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inner man
 of our beings. It is not limited to any age, but even babies have the sense of understanding the language of
music
.
Hence
 fouth it can be a
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form
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for
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form
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 of entertainment or it can have a greater impact on society. In some cases,
music
 can be used in healing therapy, in calming the
soul
 or to bring joy through entertainment. The fact that healing of the
soul
 is not easy, through
music
 therapy it can be achieved. When I lost my father a few years ago, no amount of words could bring healing to my
soul
, it was only through our religious worship
songs
which
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that
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 could heal me, it had the ability
of touching
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 the inner being of my
soul
. Not only myself depended on the worship
songs
 for healing, my mother and my brothers, found
solaice
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solace
 in the
songs
. I remember my mother visiting a therapist just after my father's death, she told me how the lady made her relax and she played soft
songs
 for her. Joyous moods can be obtained in
songs
 through
entainment
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entrainment
entertainment
in
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at
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 parties and different functions.
In as
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As
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 much as some view it as noise, I have a different opinion. We all need some entertainment at some point. We all need to be joyous one way or the other at some point. In
conclusion
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 our communities are healed, become joyous through
songs
.
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