In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays the

use

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cars

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is at

their

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its

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peak, almost everyone has their own

cars

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and I have seen if there are 3 or 4 family members in a house

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there are

also

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3 or 4

cars

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for each one.

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incoming

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coming

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the coming

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time

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in the

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20 years the

use

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cars

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will be less than today. In my

opinion

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I completely concur with the statement. I think

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way for two reasons; the more

use

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of bicycles and more

use

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of air flights, these I will examine in

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essay.

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with, I contend that

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apply

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people are using cycles more than the earlier

time

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, and their interest in using

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them

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also

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increasing day by day. People

also

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prefer using carpooling

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of going alone in a

car

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. Carpooling saves

time

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and money. My own personal experience is the best example of

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. Earlier I used to go to the office and for any work by

car

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since I like driving, so I always prefer to

use

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car

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. But these sedentary lifestyles make me obese slowly and suddenly I release I am not doing good for my health. I instantly quit the habit of using a

car

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for nearby places and now prefer to go by bicycle. Even

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in places

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places

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in places

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in the range of 10 to 15 km I try to

use

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my bicycle.

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habit solves all my health issues and without doing any gym or exercise I have

loosen

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my extra weight. Now I feel very happy about

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, in today's

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the number of air flights has increased so much that people are

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starting to prefer them

instead

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cars

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. In the

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years

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the surge of air flight will

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increase.

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, my friend is leaving around 200km far from my place and one day she plans to visit me.

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of a

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car

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she preferred to come via

flight

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a flight

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to meet me and we get an extra 3 to 4 hrs. extra to babble. And flights cost almost the same as the

car

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does but

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saves

time

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. In conclusion, I strongly believe that in the

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20 years the

use

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cars

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will be less than they are used today.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

377 words

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In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Courses in music and art should be compulsory for students in high school. Do you agree or disagree with the idea?

People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to such service?

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