Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In these modern days, processed

foods

and fizzy

drinks

are quite popular and they contain

high

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level

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levels

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of

sugar

which can cause multiple health issues. It is argued that their

prices

should be higher in order to reduce

sugar

consumption. I totally agree with that as it would help decrease causing multiple diseases as well as make the population pick up better choices for their health.

First

, setting higher

prices

for sugary products can lessen

sugar

intake as it would become unaffordable

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everyone.

Also

, it is human nature that humankind is more likely to make

impulsive

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purchase

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purchases

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on cheap items while hesitate to spend on expensive ones.

For instance

, nowadays,

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soft

drinks

such

as Coca Cola, Sprite and Pepsi are widely consumed all over the world just because their

prices

are so cheap that even the lower class people can afford them.

Thus

, the crowds that have

sugar

teeth are easily accessible to those sugary

foods

and

drinks

and

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more than the recommended daily intake of

sugar

which leads to health problems

such

as

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diabetes, heart disease and etc.

Therefore

, some dangerous diseases can be curbed by restricting

sugar

intake and that can be achieved by increasing the

prices

of sugary foodstuffs.

Secondly

, higher

prices

of manufactured

foods

and

drinks

encourage individuals to consider alternative options. They would think

swapping

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sugar

for other healthier choices.

For example

, if the soft

drinks

are more expensive than the fruits, it’s more likely the latter would be selected to buy over the former.

That is

an effective way of pushing

the

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society to make the right decision

for

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eating healthy

foods

. In conclusion, I would argue that sugary products should be more expensive because that helps the persons to think twice before buying for consumption and

also

give them

awareness

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an awareness

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of having healthier alternatives.