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a Museum near you is looking for people to do part-time voluntaryl unpaid work. you would like to volunteer

#museum #people #voluntaryl #work #volunteer
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to you today because I am interested in participating in your non-profit job in your organization; It has been always my dream to be close to rich and fascinating cultural and historical
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.
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, about my past experience, I have already worked for multiple community services
such
 as the Egyptian Pharmaceutical Student's Federation.
Particulary
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, I was a member of the public health committee, where I was in charge
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 promoting measures for preventing the spread of infectious diseases
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 as
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COVID-19.
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 timeframe when I can be available to work in your facility, I finish work by 2:00 P.M.
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, I might have some tasks that I must finish
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 as doing my home chores, or writing an essay for my IELTS examination.
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, I can give you a hand anytime after 5:00 P.M and before 9:00 P.M. I will be looking forward to your reply. You can always contact me through my email or phone number; simply reach me via [email protected] or call me on 0109423151. Faithfully, Youssef Abo-Dahab
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