Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on different factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many
people
think that being successful is what contributes to a happy life
. However
, others believe that true joy is as
a result of having Change preposition
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fulfillment
in other areas.
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fulfilment
Firstly
, is undeniable that everyone craves for
financial stability in order for them to do everything they have ever dreamt of. Change preposition
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This
is why most people
believe that the key to happiness is success
. Add an article
a success
For example
, things that make people
excited nowadays are stuff like being able to afford a nice vacation on a nice island enabling them to rid off
stressful situations in their daily lives but Change preposition
of
this
can only be attained if you have the financial capability. Hence
success is the main contributing factor to a happy life
.
However
, other people
think that money can not buy happiness, this
true
because the planet has a number of sad millionaires. Add a missing verb
is true
For instance
Hollywood most artists there have done very well in their career
but most of these individuals are depressed they lack elements that mean a lot to have a free mind. Fix the agreement mistake
careers
Hence
, financial stability is not the reason for a joyous life
.
In conclusion, believe success contributes to a fulfilled joyful life
but it does not guarantee happiness.Submitted by felicamwinji on
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