Hosting sporting events such as the Olympics and the World Cup can bring benefits to the host countries. How far do you agree with this statement? Use your own examples to support.

There is no denying the fact that international festivals for sports,
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as soccer competitions and the Olympics, bring many advantages to the countries that host them.
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it is a commonly held belief that hosting countries always get more disadvantages than benefits, there is
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an argument that opposes
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view. In my opinion, I consider that hosting sporting events is a big opportunity for countries.
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with, having sporting events in any country will improve the economy and increase its income significantly.
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, people who come from around the world contribute to enhancing the financial situation of the host country by spending money on its activities and services,
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as restaurants, hotels, tickets, entertainment events, and even transportation.
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, it
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provides many job opportunities for local people and boosts their earnings.
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, many domestic companies are established or start operating when festivals occur to serve the tourists, which leads to an increased need for employees. Another point to consider is that the presence of tourists will raise foreign currency income,
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as the dollar, which helps central banks and supports the banking sector in general. It is
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possible to say that
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is a good chance to promote the country’s culture to the world. In conclusion, despite people having different views, I believe that hosting big festivals—whether sports or concerts—will always be a great opportunity. Citizens should take advantage of it, and governments should prepare for it carefully.

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task achievement
Make sure to fully explain your ideas and points with detailed examples.
coherence
Use linking words like 'firstly', 'secondly', and 'also' to connect ideas better.
coherence
Add a sentence or two in the conclusion to summarize your main points clearly.
strength
The introduction clearly states your opinion.
strength
You provided good examples to support your points.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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