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people have various Correct your spelling
Different
view
about advertisement.It is considered by some that advertising Fix the agreement mistake
views
is has
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has
strategy
to attract Add an article
a strategy
to
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apply
the
individuals to buy Correct article usage
apply
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a thing
the thing
thing
.Fix the agreement mistake
things
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others have Add a comma
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that it would not work to a Add an article
the opinion
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convence
folk to buy.Before arriving at my position both the sides of Correct your spelling
convenience
convince
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argument
arguemnet
will be Correct article usage
the arguemnet
analyez
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analyze
further
.
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with, the foremost reason is why Linking Words
public
get attracted by the notification.To answer it, the Correct article usage
the public
brand
ambassador.To explain it, individuals follow Use synonyms
evrerything
from their Correct your spelling
everything
favorite
actor or actress.Change the spelling
favourite
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pitt
do
an Change the verb form
does
advertise
for Replace the word
advertisement
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zara
shirt, Correct article usage
a zara
he's
fans Correct your spelling
his
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zara
zara's
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brand
shirt.Another one is if women see cosmetic Use synonyms
add
on the tv or the Correct your spelling
ads
sociel
media they will purchase Correct your spelling
social
it
,they think it Correct pronoun usage
them
make
them not only Change the verb form
makes
a
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apply
beautifull
but Correct your spelling
beautiful
also
young.Linking Words
Hence
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advertisment
company has some special trick to Correct your spelling
advertisement
convence
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convince
public
.
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the public
On the other hand
, nowadays mostly folk know the.Linking Words
Firstly
, the quality of Linking Words
product
. To explicate it, the folk go in Add an article
the product
a product
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the super
a super
super market
they will check Correct your spelling
supermarket
qualiy
as well as a guarantee not by Correct your spelling
quality
pramoting
.Correct your spelling
promoting
Secondly
, some person Linking Words
buy
thing Change the verb form
buys
regarding
word of mouth,if Change preposition
through
thier
friends or relatives Correct your spelling
their
has
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have
product
they will purchase it by their review.Add an article
a product
the product
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, if they get Linking Words
bad
review of Add an article
a bad
this
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produce
they will not pay attention to Replace the word
product
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next
time.
In conclusion, it is true that advertising Correct pronoun usage
it next
brand
has some Use synonyms
trick
to get Fix the agreement mistake
tricks
attention
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the attention
from
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of
public
like Add an article
the public
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brand
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a brand
ambassador
.But I believe that there are many Fix the agreement mistake
ambassadors
reason
to public avoid Change to a plural noun
reasons
advertisement
Replace the word
advertising
product
.Fix the agreement mistake
products
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